This is EP 8 of my original series - The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy, which is my take on shows like Black Mirror and The Twilight Zone.
This story took a few weeks to get out, which is different than the other episodes, as I just started writing with not much of an outline or blueprint for this story or characters. I think it is a unique episode in this series and reads like a fever dream.
I was interested in writing a play like Waiting for Godot, after reading that play and reading some other screenplays that focused on minimalism in terms of characters and setting.
I wanted to experiment with only one setting at first. The entire screenplay was going to feature one character driving in a car, speaking to himself the entire time, as he runs some simple daily errands.
The story did not turn out this way, but I am still happy with the general themes. It is a ton of dialogue and not really much action, at least in the typical sense.
I wanted to challenge myself to write dialogue that isn't preachy, and I hope I succeeded in that venture. There is way too much politics in entertainment. I know this was always the case, but I guess it is just more noticeable these days.
Other notes ----
When I got stuck writing this story, I turned to music again. Talking Heads - Once in a Lifetime kind of guided the pace of this story. Even some of the settings, dialogue and themes became influenced by that song. The original title was simply going to be "Wednesday" but I soon realized that I had to change it to pay respect to that great song.
Music is the most important tool when I write anything, but it was especially important in this screenplay, as I didn't know if I could get this story to 50 pages at first. I didn't even know what this story was at first, as the original outline kind of got discarded as more characters entered into my head.
I don't want to give anything away, but I guess this is the most absurd screenplay I have written for this series idea. Maybe close to a David Lynch type experience.
I wanted absurdity and mental health to be some of the main themes of the series, and I think I was successful in this vision so far. Of course, religion and politics will inevitably be a part of stories like this, but I think I constantly tried to present things as abstractly and absurdly as possible.
This type of dialogue is still new to me. I struggled keeping things flowing at times and edited the dialogue many times over. I am sure I will continue to do so as I read this again and get feedback from others.
Probably the most difficult screenplay I have written for this series so far.
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The Writer: Raymond Giuffrida
I am a screenwriter and songwriter. I've been working over the last few years on my series idea - The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy, which is my take on shows like The Twilight Zone and Black Mirror. I have 12 episodes written for season one and many ideas for future episodes. Each episode features new characters/settings, although some episodes continue previous storylines. Also have three feature-length screenplays ready to be produced. Go to bioMore Scripts From Raymond
Everything is Free
A young dreamer from the country heads to the city to pursue her career in music, but discovers there is much more to the music business than just writing songs. Set in 1960's Greenwich Village.
Feature Drama, Horror, Music For sale 73pp
Elegant Eccentrics
A son is forced to reconnect with his eccentric father who loses all his money on internet poker and is kicked out of his nursing home.
Feature Adventure, Comedy, Drama For sale 106pp
Seeds of Anarchy
Three city punks flee to the southern USA to escape mob retaliation.
Feature Comedy For sale 103pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 12 - Garrity
A popular political talking head struggles to make sense of the modern digital world around him.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Thriller For sale 58pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 11 - Rebels
A soccer coach reconnects with his soccer team after the tragic death of his son, and now must battle demons both literally and metaphorically.
Episode Drama, Horror, Mystery For sale 78pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 10 - Rinse and Repeat PT II
A homeless man struggles against both political and societal forces in his attempt to build a congregation comprised of drunks, vagrants and addicts.
Episode Comedy, Drama For sale 71pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 9 - Rinse and Repeat Pt I
A tribal shaman fights through a storm to save a sick child, while also trying to restore peace and order in the process.
Episode Adventure, Drama, Thriller For sale 43pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 7 - Marathon
After experiencing a string of bad luck since High School, Joe tries to reclaim his glory days by competing in marathons, leading to the 1984 Olympic marathon in Los Angeles.
Episode Comedy, Drama, Sport For sale 58pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 6 - The Wraith's Refrain Part II
A trapped, tortured soul falls in love with a music teacher with aspirations of becoming a composer.
Episode Drama, Horror, Romance For sale 48pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 5 - The Wraith's Refrain - Part I
A cursed lake in Scotland features a long history of witchcraft and other preternatural events.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Horror For sale 48pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 4 - Man & Deer
A man going through a mid-life crisis must fight his gambling addiction and other demons with the help of his new deer companion. Animation set in Atlantic City.
Episode Animation, Comedy, Fantasy, Music For sale 53pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 3 - Jailbreak
A children's game of Jailbreak on a summer night in the American suburbs soon turns into a much more horrifying game.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Horror For sale 50pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 2 - Expanding Universe
A former musical prodigy must find peace in her senior years, after a tragic car accident kills her son.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Sci-Fi For sale 44pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 1 - The Last Prisoner
Three prisoners try to survive together after their transport is attacked by Native Americans. Set in a Frontier town in Arizona in the late 1800s.
Episode Adventure, Drama, Western For sale 47pp