This is EP 10 of my original series - The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy, which is my take on shows like Black Mirror and The Twilight Zone.
A lot of the characters from the story are also a part of a previous episode - Marathon.
This is a satire, in the same vein as Marathon.
In Marathon, I used Joe, the chain-smoking marathon runner, to write a modern book of JOB type story.
In Rinse and Repeat Part II, I follow this same path of absurdity and tried to write a story about what would happen if a homeless man inspired the homeless to form a church. Almost a modern fable paralleling the Jesus or other messianic stories.
Both Marathon and Rinse and Repeat Part II are set in 1980s Atlantic City. I don't know if gentrification hit Atlantic City as hard as some other cities, but I am sure there are plenty of tragic stories about people being kicked out of their homes or falling victim to drugs/alcohol/gambling. This can happen in any city or town in America, as seen with the Opioid crisis.
I also watched a YouTube video last week about homeless people living in an abandoned hotel near Atlantic City, which inspired me to set the homeless church in a long-abandoned hotel.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7PSihNXdnZQ&t=2s - check it out. if you are interested in things like this. Provides a pretty modern look at how Atlantic City operates. Great YouTube channel with tons of interesting videos from very nice people.
Even though I wanted to write about corruption, political conmen, gentrification and other important topics, I still wanted to present this as unbiased and as mainly a work of satire. There may be some serious parts, but I try to balance the tragedy with the comedy...and vice versa. Sometimes comedy and tragedy are the same thing anyway.
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The Writer: Raymond Giuffrida
I am a screenwriter and songwriter. I've been working over the last few years on my series idea - The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy, which is my take on shows like The Twilight Zone and Black Mirror. I have 12 episodes written for season one and many ideas for future episodes. Each episode features new characters/settings, although some episodes continue previous storylines. Also have three feature-length screenplays ready to be produced. Go to bioMore Scripts From Raymond
Everything is Free
A young dreamer from the country heads to the city to pursue her career in music, but discovers there is much more to the music business than just writing songs. Set in 1960's Greenwich Village.
Feature Drama, Horror, Music For sale 73pp
Elegant Eccentrics
A son is forced to reconnect with his eccentric father who loses all his money on internet poker and is kicked out of his nursing home.
Feature Adventure, Comedy, Drama For sale 106pp
Seeds of Anarchy
Three city punks flee to the southern USA to escape mob retaliation.
Feature Comedy For sale 103pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 12 - Garrity
A popular political talking head struggles to make sense of the modern digital world around him.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Thriller For sale 58pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 11 - Rebels
A soccer coach reconnects with his soccer team after the tragic death of his son, and now must battle demons both literally and metaphorically.
Episode Drama, Horror, Mystery For sale 78pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 9 - Rinse and Repeat Pt I
A tribal shaman fights through a storm to save a sick child, while also trying to restore peace and order in the process.
Episode Adventure, Drama, Thriller For sale 43pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 8 - Once in a Lifetime
Todd searches for meaning and truth on his birthday but struggles to maintain control over his reality and overall sanity.
Episode Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Thriller For sale 50pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 7 - Marathon
After experiencing a string of bad luck since High School, Joe tries to reclaim his glory days by competing in marathons, leading to the 1984 Olympic marathon in Los Angeles.
Episode Comedy, Drama, Sport For sale 58pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 6 - The Wraith's Refrain Part II
A trapped, tortured soul falls in love with a music teacher with aspirations of becoming a composer.
Episode Drama, Horror, Romance For sale 48pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 5 - The Wraith's Refrain - Part I
A cursed lake in Scotland features a long history of witchcraft and other preternatural events.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Horror For sale 48pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 4 - Man & Deer
A man going through a mid-life crisis must fight his gambling addiction and other demons with the help of his new deer companion. Animation set in Atlantic City.
Episode Animation, Comedy, Fantasy, Music For sale 53pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 3 - Jailbreak
A children's game of Jailbreak on a summer night in the American suburbs soon turns into a much more horrifying game.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Horror For sale 50pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 2 - Expanding Universe
A former musical prodigy must find peace in her senior years, after a tragic car accident kills her son.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Sci-Fi For sale 44pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 1 - The Last Prisoner
Three prisoners try to survive together after their transport is attacked by Native Americans. Set in a Frontier town in Arizona in the late 1800s.
Episode Adventure, Drama, Western For sale 47pp