When a multi-generational family’s weekend at a remote cabin is interrupted by a snowstorm and a petty 'Naughty List' crew, two quick-thinking kids and their retired-detective grandfather turn the house into a booby-trapped fortress — and teach the thieves a very Christmas lesson.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
109pp
Genre:
Comedy, Crime, Family
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
Everyone
Synopsis/Details

In a snowstorm-swept countryside, a family embarks on a Christmas getaway to a remote cabin, hoping for a much-needed reunion. The story centers on Dad, a cautious driver in his 40s, and Mom, his wary wife in her late 30s, who are joined by their children, 12-year-old Emma and 10-year-old Luke, along with Grandpa, a retired detective in his 70s known for his quirky wisdom and storytelling. As they navigate treacherous roads, tensions simmer beneath the surface, but the family bonds over shared laughs and Grandpa's tales of the cabin's "lucky" history. Upon arrival, the cabin's rustic charm and hidden treasures, like a loose floorboard revealing old marbles and a sleigh bell, ignite the kids' imaginations, setting a lighthearted tone that quickly shifts when mysterious noises and shadows hint at an external threat.

The family soon discovers they are not alone; a trio of bumbling burglars—led by a ruthless Mother and her two inept sons—are targeting remote cabins on their "Naughty List" for valuables. As the storm worsens, trapping everyone inside, the intruders make repeated attempts to break in, triggering a series of comedic yet tense confrontations. Grandpa, drawing on his detective past, rallies the family to fortify their defenses, transforming the cabin into a labyrinth of homemade traps using everyday items like marbles, candy canes, and Christmas decorations. Emma and Luke, initially thrilled by the adventure, become key players in setting up "Operation Jingle," a network of alarms and pitfalls that exploit the burglars' clumsiness. Meanwhile, Mom and Dad grapple with their marital strains, finding unity in the face of danger, while Grandpa's calm demeanor and clever tactics keep morale high.

As the night progresses, the burglars' attacks escalate, leading to a chaotic series of skirmishes where traps backfire humorously on the intruders, such as one son slipping on marbles or another getting doused in peppermint water and feathers. The family's ingenuity shines through, with moments of genuine peril underscoring the stakes. The climax builds to a intense standoff in the upstairs hallway, where the family's carefully laid traps culminate in a desperate struggle, forcing the burglars into humiliating defeats. Just as the situation reaches a boiling point, the sound of approaching sirens signals rescue, as local authorities, alerted by the storm and suspicious activity, arrive to apprehend the intruders.

In the resolution, the family emerges victorious, their bonds strengthened through the ordeal. They clean up the cabin, share a heartfelt laugh over their makeshift Christmas tree, and reflect on the night's events, turning a potential disaster into a memorable holiday tale. The story arc emphasizes themes of family resilience, improvisation, and the spirit of Christmas, blending humor with suspense to create a heartwarming yet thrilling narrative. Throughout, the screenplay captures the essence of turning fear into fun, with the family's growth and clever defenses making for an engaging, edge-of-your-seat experience without revealing every twist.

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The Writer: Gary Rose

I’m an multi-optioned screenwriter who, in a previous life, served as a police detective, mastering the delicate art of negotiating hostage situations. Retirement led me down a different path—teaching and writing—a journey that began with my first non-fiction book, which became an Amazon best-seller. That success ignited my passion for storytelling and introduced the world to my indomitable protagonist, FBI agent Jeannie Loomis. Believing that the ends justify the means, Jeannie has become the heart of a gripping 18-novel thriller series. My historical fiction script The Beautiful Beast was selected as a quarter-finalist in the 2025 PAGE competition. The Phantom Train script was selected in… Go to bio
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