In Victorian London, an enigmatic, beautiful woman, Helen Vaughan, leaves a wake of bizarre suicides, forcing Edward Clarke to reveal to his companions the terrifying truth of Helen's lineage: she is the offspring of a forbidden occult experiment, carried out by Dr. Raymond in Wales, which Clarke witnessed over twenty years ago, in which Helen's mother had seen the true visage of the Great God Pan. A link for a proof of concept video of the screenplay is included below. There is also a link for an MP3 audio link for a table read of the screenplay included below.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
20pp
Genre:
Horror
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Based On:
the classic horror novella by Arthur Machen
Synopsis/Details

At a squalid 1888 London boarding house, a young man named CHARLES HERBERT dies in abject terror, suffocated by an invisible presence while a woman's mocking laughter echoes off-screen. Sweat-soaked, prematurely aged, and clutching a sketch of a beautiful, unsettling woman, Herbert's final moments are a tableau of pure horror and depravity, witnessed only by an empty rocking chair.
The story then flashes back to 1867, where EDWARD CLARKE, an antiquarian, visits his old friend DR. MARCUS RAYMOND at his isolated country estate in Caermaen. Raymond, a brilliant but dangerously obsessive scientist and occultist, expounds on his theories: the world is an illusion, and behind it lies the primordial chaos represented by the Great God Pan. He has spent years preparing an experiment to lift this veil, and he plans to do so by making a surgical incision in the brain of MARY VAUGHAN, a trusting seventeen-year-old girl he rescued from the London gutter. Despite Clarke's desperate protests, Raymond proceeds that night, performing the operation in his dimly lit laboratory while the household servants are dismissed. When Mary awakens, her eyes no longer hold innocence but reflect an unimaginable, blinding horror. She begins screaming, her mind shattered. Raymond, defeated, admits that she has seen Pan. Catatonic and grey, Mary never recovers and dies nine months later after giving birth to a daughter, Helen.
Returning to 1888, Clarke, now in his sixties, meets with STEPHEN VILLIERS, a determined young man whose friend Charles Herbert has just died. Villiers reveals that Herbert was the latest in a string of young, prominent men—Arthur Meyrick, Lord Argentine, Sidney Crashaw, and Lord Swanleigh—who have all met gruesome, inexplicable deaths. Clarke explains the connection: Herbert's death was caused by the same woman—Helen Vaughan, who is Mary's daughter. Having survived her mother's tragic fate, Helen has lived under many names—Mrs. Beaumont, Mrs. Vaughan, Mrs. Herbert—moving through London society and corrupting, then destroying, the men who fall under her spell. Clarke shows Villiers a sketch of Helen, noting her unsettling gaze. He reveals the evidence: the children in Caermaen who saw Helen in the woods were driven to madness, and a young girl, Rachel M., vanished into thin air. Clarke and Villiers resolve to end the nightmare.
Armed with an ultimatum, Clarke, Villiers, and DR. ROBERT MATHESON, a physician who personally knew two of Helen's victims, confront Helen at her residence on Ashley Street in Piccadilly. In the darkness, Helen's defiance is palpable. Villiers hands her a length of hemp rope, and she accepts it without hesitation, ascending the stairs to her bedroom and slamming the door. After a brief, strangulated breath, silence falls. Matheson reluctantly enters the room to confirm her death. Inside, he witnesses an unspeakable horror: Helen's body rapidly decomposes, melts, and writhes in inhuman convulsions. Her flesh transforms through a series of monstrous shapes—a leering young man, a coarse ape-like beast, and finally a bubbling mass of primeval, gelatinous matter—reverting to the naked form of Pan itself, the original form of chaos. Matheson screams and collapses, warning the others not to enter. The three men flee the house, burdened by the stench and the knowledge of what they have witnessed.
Two weeks later, a shattered and emaciated Matheson writes a letter to Clarke, describing his constant nightmares and the full, horrifying account of Helen's metamorphosis, encoded in Latin. He implores Clarke to destroy the letter and to be cautious with Villiers. As he walks to a post box to send it, Matheson is seized by a searing pain in his chest. He collapses and dies of a heart attack on the street, another victim of the terror that originated with one man's hubris and the unthinkable god he unleashed upon the world.

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The Writer: Glyndwr Edwards

To create original stories has been my primary aim and I am always fascinated when the premise alters during writing and takes an unexpected turn. This usually results in a better outcome. There is so much that is left unsaid, with forgotten stories, that the field is never exhausted in whatever genre a writer specialises. In collaboration with my brother, we have written a number of short screenplays based on forgotten aspects of British Folklore and History. The screenplays have been praised for their originality and ambiguity, with the story being left to the discretion of the reader to draw their own conclusion. This will be seen in the follow up to "The Brotherhood of Shadows": "Veils… Go to bio
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