When her brother booby-traps her hair with peanut butter, an eight-year-old marches door to door through her small town chasing every neighbor's "guaranteed" home remedy — only to find the real fix was never about her hair at all.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
19pp
Genre:
Comedy, Family
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
Everyone
Synopsis/Details

In a quiet, close-knit town, eight-year-old Lily wakes up to find her hair matted with peanut butter, courtesy of her mischievous six-year-old brother Damon. Determined to fix it before anyone can stop her, Lily sets off on a chaotic quest through the neighborhood, collecting one bizarre "cure" after another from a string of eccentric neighbors — strawberry jam from the cat lady, marshmallow fluff from the bearded man next door, bread from the kind man down the street, and pickle brine from the sharp-tongued woman on the corner. Each remedy fails, leaving Lily's hair (and patience) worse than before. After a full day of failed fixes and thirty-minute waits, Lily finally accepts that nobody's grandmother's trick is going to save her — and decides the only real solution is to give Damon a taste of his own medicine. She ambushes him with everything she's collected all day, restoring some balance to the household (and her dignity) just before their parents walk back in.

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The Writer: Tim Bragg

I write character-driven stories that don't flinch — horror, psychological thriller, and comedy, built with an eye toward what's actually producible, not just what's ambitious on the page. My short story Soul Mate reached the top spot on Coverfly's Red List and stayed in the top ten for several months. My work has since placed as a Grand Finalist and Silver Nib Winner with #LetsMakeIt! and a Finalist with ScreenCraft. I'm the author of the educational book series Higher Education, and I currently have a finished slate of feature screenplays ready to bring to producers. I'm looking for representation to help get them there. Go to bio
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