On his way to sign a career-making merger that will destroy his brother, an ambitious corporate shark is trapped in a descending elevator with the future version of himself, who reveals that the signature he’s about to provide is a twenty-year sentence of regret.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
5pp
Genre:
Drama, Thriller
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details

The Concept. The Fifth Floor is a high-tension "movie in a bottle." It is a modern, tactical re-imagining of the moral-testing tradition, stripped of supernatural fluff and grounded in the cold, clinical reality of high-stakes corporate ambition.

The Hook. The script relies on a singular, impossible event: a 31-year-old lawyer is confronted by his 51-year-old self. The older man isn't there to give a sermon—he’s there to show the physical residue of a ruined life, including an uncontrollable hand tremor born from the exact betrayal Jordan is about to commit. The descent from the 5th floor to the lobby functions as a real-time ticking clock, forcing Jordan to decide if he will follow his older self’s path or commit a final, decisive act of defiance against the corporate machine.

Why This Project?
• Production Feasibility: A singular location (elevator), a small cast (two leads, one supporting), and zero CGI make this an incredibly efficient production-ready piece.
• Performance-Driven: Designed as a "calling card" short, it provides a showcase for two actors to play two ends of a spectrum—the arrogant predator and the broken, haunted man he becomes.
• Universal Stakes: The story touches on the friction between integrity and success, the weight of family loyalty, and the terrifying idea that our future selves are watching our current choices.

Genre: Psychological Drama / Surrealism

Setting: Contained (Elevator & Lobby)

Comps:
• The Twilight Zone (for the surreal, moral-testing "Mirror Image" quality of the encounter)
• Locke (for the high-tension, contained-location procedural stakes)
• Buried (for the extreme claustrophobia and reliance on a single, character-driven location)

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The Writer: Mark D. Clark

Mark D. Clark is a screenwriter specializing in high-stakes suspense, horror, and action-thrillers. A retired Navy Commander with 30 years of service, Mark’s writing is deeply informed by a career that spanned from serving as a hospital corpsman with a Marine infantry battalion during the Persian Gulf War to serving as an Operations Officer (S3) and Intel Officer (S2) during the Iraq War. This boots-on-the-ground experience lends a visceral authenticity to his military and supernatural thrillers, grounding even the most fantastical elements in a gritty, lived-in reality. A graduate of the Marine Corps University with a Masters in Military Studies and an MBA from New Hampshire College, Mark… Go to bio
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