A young violin prodigy must gamble her future in a high-stakes snooker match to save her family—forcing her broken father to confront a tragedy he never survived, and discovering that redemption is the hardest game of all.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
120pp
Genre:
Drama, Family, Sport
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details

Set against the long shadow of the Lockerbie Air Disaster, The Broken Places is a gritty, heartfelt drama about inheritance—of talent, trauma, and unfinished grief.

Twenty years after Pan Am Flight 103 tore the sky apart above the sleepy Scottish town of Lockerbie, Sam Long (23) has grown up in the emotional fallout. She is fiercely talented, stubbornly resilient, and quietly carrying the weight of a family that never recovered. Sam has inherited two gifts: a rare musical brilliance on the violin from her once-celebrated father Teddy, and a preternatural skill at snooker from her Uncle Bill, a compulsive gambler clinging to a crumbling snooker hall that has become both refuge and trap.

Teddy, once a world-renowned violinist, has not played a meaningful note since the night of the disaster. Haunted by loss and guilt, he drowns his memories in whisky, surrounded by relics of a past life and the unspoken truth of what was taken from him. Sam loves him deeply—but she is terrified that if he doesn’t confront his grief, she will lose him too.

Uncle Bill is fighting his own losing battle. His beloved snooker club—leaking, debt-ridden, and fading—is his entire identity. When Bill makes a reckless bet with a small-time but vicious mobster, Reginald Smith, he stakes the club itself and loses. With thirty thousand pounds owed and violence looming, Bill is out of options.

Except Sam.

Against all reason, Sam steps forward to play in Bill’s place, wagering everything on her skill at the table. What begins as a desperate gamble becomes a crucible—forcing Sam to balance the weight of her family’s survival against her own future. At the same time, she receives an audition offer from Juilliard, a once-in-a-lifetime chance that could take her far from Glasgow, from her father, from the broken places she’s been holding together.

Caught between loyalty and escape, Sam must decide whether saving others means sacrificing herself.

Her relationship with her boyfriend Michael strains under the pressure. Michael dreams of a simple, shared future, but Sam’s life is accelerating toward a crossroads neither of them is prepared for. As secrets pile up and danger closes in, love itself becomes something fragile—and potentially expendable.

On the eve of the high-stakes snooker match, everything converges: Bill’s pride, Teddy’s buried grief, Sam’s talent, and the unresolved trauma that has defined all their lives. The question is no longer whether Sam can win a game—but whether she can break the cycle of silence, addiction, and blame that has held her family hostage since that fateful night in the sky.

The Broken Places is a story about what survives catastrophe: the scars we carry, the talents we inherit, and the courage it takes to finally find redemption and play again—whether with a violin, a cue, or a life on the line.

Attached Talent

James Buchanan. Director.

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The Writer: Scott Creighton

An unproduced screenwriter who's been dabbling in the art of screenwriting since Noah was just a wee lad. Like forever . But it's something I simply enjoy. Creating new worlds, populated by people I'd like to know (and some I wouldn't). Trying to better understand the human condition. Our hopes, fears and dreams. Not at all hung up on having anything produced. It's all just for fun. Looking forward to reading and learning what you have to say. Go to bio
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