When a birthday balloon ride over the Colorado Rockies is torn open by a storm that outran the forecast, a distracted father, his wife, their ten-year-old twins, and a rookie magician are stranded on a rock ledge nine thousand feet up — and with the only rescue plane grounded for three days, they have to walk themselves down a mountain that has no intention of letting them.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
92pp
Genre:
Action, Adventure, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details

Kevin Henderson has spent his sons' childhood with a phone against his ear. On the twins' tenth birthday, his wife Karen extracts a promise — cameras only, no phones — and the family drives up to a mountain meadow for a hot air balloon ride. Their pilot is Samuel, fifteen years and four thousand flights in, a man who once kept flying two minutes too long and has never forgiven himself for it. Their entertainment is Tony, a children's magician on his third flight ever, who has not told anyone he is afraid of heights.
A storm cell moves east faster than the morning forecast promised. Samuel calls the descent the instant dispatch warns him, but the wind gets there first. A pine branch rakes the envelope open, and Samuel fights the balloon down onto a twelve-foot ledge — rock instead of rocks, the one call he gets exactly right. Everyone survives. Tony's ankle does not.
Down in the valley, ranger dispatcher Dana Reyes discovers the rescue plane is grounded on a cracked manifold. Minimum three days. The storm rules out a helicopter. Five people are on a ledge with one cooler of birthday sandwiches, and the only way off is a faded switchback trail down the east face.
Samuel stays with the wreck to keep a dying radio alive and give search crews something to spot from the air. The Hendersons and Tony start walking. Over two days they cross an eighteen-inch ledge that finds the limit of Kevin's own nerve, face down a mountain lion with a shout and a collapsible magician's cane, lose their remaining food and water in a rockslide, and rope themselves together through a creek swollen to a river. A false summit nearly breaks Neil, the brave twin. Joseph, the frightened one, quietly becomes the steady one.
What the mountain strips out of them is the pretending. Karen admits she is angry. Kevin admits he is scared, and that he never once asked his wife about the seven years she spent in an ER. Tony admits he took the job because he needed the money and misses his father. Samuel, alone on the ledge, looks at a photograph of a daughter he has not called in six years.
Ground teams find them on the lower ridge on the second morning, all five walking. But the rescue is the middle of the story, not the end. Kevin takes a call from his office and, for the first time in his life, says no. Samuel makes the call he has been avoiding for six years. A week later, in the Hendersons' backyard, the twins blow out candles shaped like the number ten under a tethered balloon that rises exactly six feet — and Kevin, holding a replacement camera, actually takes the picture.

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Welcome to my profile. My name is Laura Donahue, and I taught college chemistry in the past and I am now retired. I enjoy writing and watching movies; therefore, I decided to write screenplays. I am a dedicated storyteller with a diverse library of completed projects, which includes 15 feature length screenplays, and 2 short scripts. My focus is on creating compelling narratives with strong character dynamics. I have written screenplays in a variety of genres, including Romance, Romance Thriller, and Disaster Thriller. I also co-wrote a screenplay in the Crime Thriller genre. I have most recently written two Sci-Fi screenplays. Note to Producers & Filmmakers: To ensure script security,… Go to bio
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