When a disgraced ride-safety engineer turns roller coasters into murder weapons to avenge his daughter’s death, FBI profiler Jeannie Loomis must stop his final attack before thousands attend a grand opening.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
116pp
Genre:
Action, Adventure, Crime, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Based On:
My Indie Book With The Same Title
Synopsis/Details

After a catastrophic roller coaster collapse at Ocean View Amusement Park in California kills twenty-one people, including six children, FBI profiler Jeannie Loomis is called in when ATF discovers explosive residue hidden at a structural stress point beneath the track. What first appears to be a tragic mechanical failure is quickly revealed as something far more calculated: someone used engineering, physics, and access to turn the ride itself into a murder weapon.

Jeannie and her partner, ASAC Ismail Flores, trace the attack to a fake maintenance worker who entered the park using a spoofed inspection order and a contractor badge under the name P. Harris. The bomber knew the blind spots, the service routes, and the precise load-transfer point that would cause the coaster to tear itself apart. As Jeannie studies the evidence, she realizes Ocean View was not a random act of violence. It was a test.

The trail leads to Sea Mist Fun Pier in Myrtle Beach, where another inspection has been mysteriously rescheduled and the park’s famous wooden coaster, the Carolina Cyclone, is being prepared for a major summer kickoff event. Jeannie, Flores, and ATF agent Tony Rizzo race to South Carolina, where they battle corporate pressure, local politics, and the fear of causing a public panic while trying to search the park quietly before thousands of guests arrive.

When a second device is found hidden inside the Carolina Cyclone, Jeannie’s instincts are proven right. A chase through the darkened amusement park leads to the arrest of Miles Tanner, a former ride mechanic carrying fake credentials and access cards. Tanner reveals that he is only an accomplice. The true architect is Nolan Keene, a brilliant but disgraced ride-safety engineer whose seven-year-old daughter, Emily, died years earlier in the Lake Kincaid coaster collapse after warnings were ignored and reports were buried.

Consumed by grief and rage, Keene has decided to expose the amusement industry’s negligence by turning its own thrill rides into public executions. Ocean View was the opening act. Sea Mist was the warning. His final target is Pinnacle Point, home of Guardian, the heavily promoted “safest ride in America,” where Apex executives, media, families, and thousands of guests will gather for a grand opening.

As Jeannie closes in, Keene forces her into a deadly race against time inside a crowded amusement park designed to celebrate safety, speed, and spectacle. To stop him, she must outthink a man who understands every bolt, stress point, access route, and emergency system better than the people who built the ride. But Keene is not chasing money or ideology. He is a grieving father who believes the industry killed his child — and that only another disaster will finally make the world listen.

With Guardian loaded, the crowd watching, and Keene’s final plan already in motion, Jeannie must stop the safest ride in America from becoming the deadliest.

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The Writer: Gary Rose

I’m a multi-optioned screenwriter, novelist, retired police detective, and former educator. During my law-enforcement career, I investigated serious crimes and learned the delicate art of negotiating hostage situations—experience that continues to influence the tension, authenticity, and characters found throughout my work. My newest novel and screenplay, ALL IS NOT CALM, is a Christmas action thriller with a simple commercial hook: “Die Hard on a luxury cruise ship.” On Christmas Eve, a former Coast Guard commander must save his estranged wife—the ship’s captain—and hundreds of passengers when a vengeful hijacker turns the vessel into a weapon aimed at a fuel terminal. The published novel… Go to bio
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