When a staged murder linked to an old love song exposes a buried 1962 secret, FBI profiler Jeannie Loomis races to stop two rival killers turning nostalgia, betrayal, and loneliness into a deadly duet.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
90pp
Genre:
Crime, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Based On:
Novel of the same name by author
Synopsis/Details

Seventy-two-year-old John Keane expects a romantic evening with a woman he met online. Instead, he is drugged, murdered, and carefully staged beside a white rose while the old love song “Johnny Angel” plays from a record player wired to activate when police enter.

FBI Special Agent in Charge Jeannie Loomis and her trusted partner, Ismail Flores, are called in when John’s scrubbed dating accounts reveal interstate activity. The crime scene is theatrical but deeply personal: the word LIAR is written across John’s mirror, an old photograph has been torn in half, and the date June 17, 1962 points toward the vanished town history of Bellweather, California.

As Jeannie digs into John’s past, she learns he and his older brother Donald were connected to Paula Merritt, a teenage girl who disappeared after a dance at a lakeside pavilion in 1962. John’s surviving relatives admit that Donald came home that night with blood on his shirt and that their father destroyed evidence to protect the family.

Before Jeannie can determine what happened to Paula, another elderly Bellweather survivor, Patricia Lane, is targeted. Gas fills Patricia’s home while the song “Patches” plays, but she is rescued moments before death. Her attacker is a man—not the dark-haired woman seen entering John’s condominium.

Jeannie realizes she is not hunting one serial killer, but two offenders working in a volatile partnership. The woman stages intimate, symbolic punishments tied to old songs. The man, using the name David Cole, is driven by recognition and increasingly resents that the media credits his partner with both crimes.

Patricia reveals that Donald assaulted Paula on the night of the dance. She and the others found evidence but remained silent out of fear. Walter Crane, Paula’s teenage sweetheart, confirms that Paula escaped Bellweather and later gave birth to a daughter. That daughter, now in her sixties, is identified as Angela Vale.

Angela believes Donald Keane was her father and that John, Patricia, Samuel Pike, and the others helped conceal what happened to Paula. She has transformed her mother’s pain into a sequence of musical judgments, assigning each intended victim a song and a moral verdict.

But David begins changing Angela’s carefully planned sequence. When he targets Samuel Pike, Angela secretly tracks him and sends the FBI enough information to ensure he will be found. Samuel reveals the truth: Donald did not kill Paula. He beat her and forced her into his car, but she escaped at a bus station and fled to Nevada.

Angela lures David, Samuel, Walter, and the FBI to an abandoned waterfront warehouse for what she calls the final dance. There, Walter reveals the truth Angela has refused to accept: Donald was not her father. Walter was. Paula lied about Angela’s paternity to protect her from Donald’s powerful father.

Angela’s entire identity—and every murder she has justified—was built on the wrong father.

Humiliated and betrayed, David turns on Angela. She injects him, ignites the warehouse, and escapes while David dies in the fire. Before being taken to the hospital, Walter tells Jeannie that Angela’s real name was Rose, chosen because a white rose was Paula’s only beautiful memory from the night she fled Bellweather.

The investigation then leads unexpectedly to Jeannie’s formidable neighbor, Dolores, who reveals that her father helped Paula escape and created the identity Helen Vale. Dolores has secretly preserved Paula’s diary, records, photographs, and a sealed letter addressed to Rose.

Paula’s diary confirms that Walter was Rose’s father and that Paula concealed the truth out of fear, not shame. One final record is missing from the collection. Jeannie traces it to the Nevada boardinghouse where Paula once hid.

There, Rose waits inside a shrine to her mother while “Only the Lonely” plays. Surrounded by explosives, she confronts Jeannie, insisting that grief, abandonment, and betrayal made them alike. Jeannie refuses to grant her that absolution.

Rose argues that she never freely chose the life she became. Jeannie reminds her that she chose it repeatedly—through every victim, every record, every rose, and every opportunity to stop.

When Rose tries to detonate the apartment, Ismail cuts the control wire. After a violent struggle, Jeannie arrests her.

In custody, Rose is given Paula’s unopened final letter. Jeannie refuses to tell her which version of Paula to believe, offering only the truth: everyone failed, everyone lied, and Rose still chose murder.

Weeks later, Rose awaits trial. Walter waits to see whether his daughter will accept him. Jeannie and Ismail drive toward San Francisco as “Lonely Boy” begins playing on the radio. Jeannie switches it off, then chooses a different song.

The past remains. But it no longer controls the ending.

Why Producers Should Want to Make Only the Lonely

A fresh serial-killer hook: The murders are built around classic love songs, white roses, staged tableaux, and moral judgments. The music is not a gimmick—it drives the mystery, character psychology, and visual identity.

A strong female lead: Jeannie Loomis is intelligent, emotionally guarded, authoritative, and highly castable. She is neither an action cliché nor a passive investigator. Her final confrontation with Rose is psychological, personal, and actor-driven.

Two antagonists instead of one: Rose and David are not merely partners. They are rivals competing over authorship, control, and recognition. Their collapsing alliance creates suspense beyond the basic question of who the killer is.

Commercial but emotionally grounded: Beneath the procedural engine is a story about loneliness, inherited trauma, romantic mythology, silence, and the damage caused when people confuse pain with permission.

Contained production value: The script offers a cinematic thriller without requiring an excessive budget. Its principal locations—condominium, police/FBI offices, hospital, assisted-living facility, suburban homes, motel, warehouse, and apartment—are practical and controllable.

Distinctive visual marketing: A blonde FBI agent, a spinning 45, a white rose, vintage song titles, fog, the Golden Gate Bridge, and blood-stained “First Dance” imagery provide immediate trailer, poster, and streaming-thumbnail value.

Built-in audience recognition: Classic songs and nostalgic imagery broaden appeal to older viewers while the serial-killer structure, rivalry, and fast pace remain accessible to contemporary thriller audiences.

Prestige casting opportunities: The screenplay offers substantial roles for an actress playing Jeannie, a layered older antagonist as Rose, a charismatic supporting lead as Ismail, and strong dramatic parts for Walter, Dolores, Patricia, Samuel, and David.

Franchise potential: Jeannie Loomis is already the center of an established thriller series. The film stands alone, but the character and investigative world can support future features, streaming films, or a procedural series.

A complete, efficient screenplay: At approximately 89 pages, the story moves quickly, avoids unnecessary subplots, and delivers murder, investigation, reversals, emotional revelation, action, and closure without inflating production costs or runtime.

Only the Lonely offers producers a rare combination: a recognizable thriller format, an original musical identity, a compelling female investigator, mature roles for experienced actors, contained production demands, and a finale built around character rather than spectacle.

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The Writer: Gary Rose

I’m an multi-optioned screenwriter who, in a previous life, served as a police detective, mastering the delicate art of negotiating hostage situations. Retirement led me down a different path—teaching and writing—a journey that began with my first non-fiction book, which became an Amazon best-seller. That success ignited my passion for storytelling and introduced the world to my indomitable protagonist, FBI agent Jeannie Loomis. Believing that the ends justify the means, Jeannie has become the heart of a gripping 18-novel thriller series. My historical fiction script The Beautiful Beast was selected as a quarter-finalist in the 2025 PAGE competition. The Phantom Train script was selected in… Go to bio
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