When a poisoned San Francisco gala exposes a buried government cover-up, FBI SAC Jeannie Loomis must stop a grieving survivor from turning Washington’s water panic into national revenge.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
105pp
Genre:
Action, Crime, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details

After several powerful guests collapse at an elite San Francisco civic dinner, FBI SAC Jeannie Loomis is called into what first appears to be a targeted poisoning. But the killer’s message — San Francisco was the warning. Washington is the sentence — points to something far larger than one ballroom.

With her trusted ASAC Ismail Flores and water-security consultant Dr. Nathan Vale, Jeannie traces the victims to Bitter Creek, a long-buried contamination scandal involving a federal contractor, sealed reports, sick families, and officials who chose public calm over public warning. At the center of the forgotten tragedy is Caleb Hollis, a survivor whose childhood was destroyed by poisoned water and institutional silence.

As San Francisco panics and Washington prepares for a national infrastructure summit, Jeannie uncovers a second threat: the poison is no longer just chemical. It is political, corporate, and personal. Caleb’s sister Rebecca, now working in summit credentialing under a changed name, becomes the key to a “living ledger” of victims her father forced her to memorize when paper records could be destroyed.

The investigation escalates from contaminated glasses to hidden corporate files, a dangerous preserved sample, and a Washington green-room attack involving a former Bitter Creek nurse. But when corporate successor Asterion attempts to twist the narrative and frame the survivors as terrorists, Jeannie must expose not only the killer, but the system that helped create him.

In the end, Bitter Water becomes a thriller about more than murder. It is about memory, grief, public trust, and the terrible cost of telling people the truth too late.

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The Writer: Gary Rose

I’m a multi-optioned screenwriter, novelist, retired police detective, and former educator. During my law-enforcement career, I investigated serious crimes and learned the delicate art of negotiating hostage situations—experience that continues to influence the tension, authenticity, and characters found throughout my work. My newest novel and screenplay, ALL IS NOT CALM, is a Christmas action thriller with a simple commercial hook: “Die Hard on a luxury cruise ship.” On Christmas Eve, a former Coast Guard commander must save his estranged wife—the ship’s captain—and hundreds of passengers when a vengeful hijacker turns the vessel into a weapon aimed at a fuel terminal. The published novel… Go to bio
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