A man trapped in a traffic jam recounts the night he “ruined everything,” but as his story unravels under the quiet pressure of a taxi driver, he is forced to confront a truth he’s been avoiding—that he didn’t just make a mistake… he chose not to save her.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
12pp
Genre:
Drama, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Based On:
Original Story of Berki Ferenc
Synopsis/Details

John is stuck in traffic on the way to the airport, desperate to escape the city—and something far worse. Irritated and unraveling, he clashes with the calm, silent taxi driver. When the driver finally prompts him to speak, John begins recounting the night before.

Through fragmented memories and intrusive auditory hallucinations—a ringing phone, a woman’s desperate “please”—we learn about Kathreen, the woman he loves. She had been unstable, terrified, begging for help. John insists he was trying to calm her, to help her rest. But his version of events begins to crack.

As the taxi moves through an increasingly quiet city, the driver asks simple but piercing questions. John’s narrative slowly shifts—from control, to confusion, to denial, and finally to realization. Kathreen was injured. There was a phone. There was time.

And John did nothing.

The taxi stops. Not at the airport—but at a police station. John doesn’t resist. For the first time, he sees clearly.

He steps out and walks inside.

All Accolades & Coverage

Winner of the Best Script on Cencal Fin Lit Filmfestival in Fresno,California 2026.

https://cencalfinlitfilmfestival.com/#winners

Selected: ICJ International Film Festival 2026.

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The Writer: Ferenc Berki

I’m a Europe-based writer creating metaphysical sci-fi and atmospheric horror driven by psychological depth and existential themes. My stories explore identity, consciousness, and the fragile boundary between reality and the unknown. Alongside speculative fiction, I write LGBTQ+ narratives that focus on authentic human connection, transformation, and emotional truth — often blending genre storytelling with intimate character journeys. With a background in visual art and performance, my writing leans cinematic, immersive, and emotionally intense. I’m drawn to bold concepts, haunting imagery, and stories that challenge perception while remaining deeply human. All screenplays presented on this… Go to bio
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