Thu, 2025-Jun-12 07:45 (BST)
Good morning all..
I have launched a new web page to help pitch my screen play...I am getting amazing feedback but from potential viewers butvwill I put the industry off?
I have a question...
Should I add brief outlines of my key characters as well as the episodes?
A summary of the treatment?
Or am I giving too much away and spoiling my opportunity to get optioned?
I would live to hear your feedback and opinion?
Thanyou all in advance...
Si
https://www.royalmarineshistory.com/commando-men-tv-film-movie
I don't think you're giving too much away.
You can't have enough summaries though. You gotta entice people in with something they can take a quick look at.
Thanks for the advice....I will start working on it!
Si