Tue, 2024-Aug-06 14:27 (BST)
I would just like to know somebody's thoughts on the logline for my werewolf horror/drama screenplay feature.
After the gruesome slaughter of his parents, a short tempered delinquent with no direction in life, is granted custody of his little sisters, all while a pack of manipulative werewolves prey on their town.
Nice touch with the manipulative werewolves. Full points for that. To improve overall, maybe try to mention how the protagonist solves the werewolf challenge. It seems that what you could leave out are the parents and him having no direction in life.